Wednesday, 3 December 2014

First Cut and Feedback



Feedback

Person 1 - Oliver, 16

Very good
some cuts are shaky
Upstairs movement needs changing
Good dolly bit
Camera angles where interesting

Person 2 - Becky, 17

Good
Variety of shots
Shaky shots
Continuity - Good
Don't know where the story will lead.

Person 3 - Mitch, 16

Shaky after some shots
Good close ups
Good Variety of shots and angles

Person 4 - Ash, 17

Variety of shots
Different ages of actresses good
letter looks realistic
good dolly movement

Overall
Overall the feedback that we got was good but there was some editing and camera shots and movements that people thought needed to be changed and tightened up a bit to make it even better. We also need to add the Institution logo and the text over the clips.

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