Thursday, 4 December 2014

Mind Map


Movie Idea 1
Our first idea for a film was to have a western style thriller with a male protagonist and a male antagonist. There would be a female love interest that would get captured by the antagonist and the protagonist would have to go and save her. The film would end with the antagonist in a prison and with the protagonist getting with the girl.

Movie Idea 2
Our second movie idea was to have a Neo Noir style Thriller with a female protagonist. Her parents were killed when she was young and she now lives with her grandparents. The antagonist would be a corrupt business man that had her parents killed and the film would be her getting revenge for her parents death by having anonymous tips in the form of letters that gets her closer to the corrupt businessman.

Movie Idea 3
Our third movie idea was to make a horror that would have been based in a creepy place. There would be a cult of cannibals and a teenage girl and grandmother make human pies for the cult and they get the humans by killing anyone who steps foot in the forest. The Protagonist would help to kill the teenager and the grandmother and take down the cult. The antagonist would be the cult and the Teenage girl and grandmother.

Wednesday, 3 December 2014

First Cut and Feedback



Feedback

Person 1 - Oliver, 16

Very good
some cuts are shaky
Upstairs movement needs changing
Good dolly bit
Camera angles where interesting

Person 2 - Becky, 17

Good
Variety of shots
Shaky shots
Continuity - Good
Don't know where the story will lead.

Person 3 - Mitch, 16

Shaky after some shots
Good close ups
Good Variety of shots and angles

Person 4 - Ash, 17

Variety of shots
Different ages of actresses good
letter looks realistic
good dolly movement

Overall
Overall the feedback that we got was good but there was some editing and camera shots and movements that people thought needed to be changed and tightened up a bit to make it even better. We also need to add the Institution logo and the text over the clips.