You are catching up with your research into similar products David, and your work shows some attention to detail and considering of the key concepts. However you still need to address the issues mentioned in my first feedback about your research.
Your target audience research is much to vague and broad, in order to take this into a level 3 you must:
Discuss similar products, what makes them similar, their age rating (mention who awards the ratings and why) and give specific examples of WHY your target audience is this. We will be looking at some audience theories that you can add to this post as well.
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